1. her whole essay had strenght
2. say what school you were going to
3. the details she had in it and her word usage
4.in very begining when she was describing her outfit.
Friday, January 27, 2012
Thursday, January 26, 2012
Empathy Questions
In my narrative i think i did more telling then showing there is some dialouge i could probally ad more dialouge to my story. my setting is well developed i could always add more details and more appealing things to the readeer
Friday, January 20, 2012
Questions
Questions
1. I thought that the narratvie was very good it gave good detail and good imagery. I felt as if i was there with her.
2. It wass intresting because she learned how to read and write by making words on her hands i thought that was a really intresting way to learn how to do that.
3. What suprised me wass when she had a change in heart after her teacher tought her the word water again when she ran the water in her hand.
5. . ex.1The afternoon sun penetrated the mass of honeysuckle that covered the porch, and fell on my upturned face. My fingers lingered almost unconsciously on the familiar leaves and blossoms which had just come forth to greet the sweet southern spring.
Ex2. We walked down the path to the well-house, attracted by the fragrance of the honeysuckle with which it was covered. Some one was drawing water and my teacher placed my hand under the spout. As the cool stream gushed over one hand she spelled into the other the word water, first slowly, then rapidly. I stood still, my whole attention fixed upon the motions of her fingers
ex3.I felt approaching footsteps. I stretched out my hand as I supposed to my mother. Some one took it, and I was caught up and held close in the arms of her who had come to reveal all things to me, and, more than all things else, to love me.
4. yes, because i never thought she had it that ruff and it must take alot to have to change your way of learing
6.When you writting a biography you dont get how the person felt throught out the story it also kind of makes the story come more to life when your getting the person perspective who is wrtting the story.
7. my trip to flordia
my trip to arizona
first day in ohio
1. I thought that the narratvie was very good it gave good detail and good imagery. I felt as if i was there with her.
2. It wass intresting because she learned how to read and write by making words on her hands i thought that was a really intresting way to learn how to do that.
3. What suprised me wass when she had a change in heart after her teacher tought her the word water again when she ran the water in her hand.
5. . ex.1The afternoon sun penetrated the mass of honeysuckle that covered the porch, and fell on my upturned face. My fingers lingered almost unconsciously on the familiar leaves and blossoms which had just come forth to greet the sweet southern spring.
Ex2. We walked down the path to the well-house, attracted by the fragrance of the honeysuckle with which it was covered. Some one was drawing water and my teacher placed my hand under the spout. As the cool stream gushed over one hand she spelled into the other the word water, first slowly, then rapidly. I stood still, my whole attention fixed upon the motions of her fingers
ex3.I felt approaching footsteps. I stretched out my hand as I supposed to my mother. Some one took it, and I was caught up and held close in the arms of her who had come to reveal all things to me, and, more than all things else, to love me.
4. yes, because i never thought she had it that ruff and it must take alot to have to change your way of learing
6.When you writting a biography you dont get how the person felt throught out the story it also kind of makes the story come more to life when your getting the person perspective who is wrtting the story.
7. my trip to flordia
my trip to arizona
first day in ohio
Thursday, January 19, 2012
Where am i from
I am from the hot state of Texas. From armadillos plodding down the black tar roads. From spending summers swimming in the apartment pool to take our mind of the heat. From eating Chikos Tacos because they are the best know to man because of there not like the normal Taco Bell Taco it has all you basic needs for being a good hardy taco. I am from the fun exciting times at Disney world. From the super thrilling and amazing water rides to help his stay cool when we were super hot. From the fun and daring rides like the Dueling Dragon it felt like we were on a race with the wind in our face. I am from the beautiful beaches of Puerto Rico. From the amazing clear blue water. It was amazing because you could see all the sea life. From the amazing time in the water with my family and friends. I am from hard work and dedication, From working hard no matter what happens. From spending a day perfecting what I do best. I am from having fun and adventurous times. From jumping off a 150ft cliff down into water. This all happen in the best summer of my life it was summer 2010-2011. From riding my bike down the biggest hill in my apartment complex with my friends and sister because we wanted to try something new and adventurous. I am from a kind loving and family. From people who show how much they care and love. From spending lots of family time together. I am from soccer and basketball life. From going to every soccer and basketball of my brother and sisters. From being around all the sweaty players after there practice. All those things represent where I am from.
Tuesday, January 17, 2012
Questions
1. No, because i was never good at eniglish or grammar.
2. short story,comic srtip, notes to friends
3.notes from friends,magzines, nonfiction,
4. no
5. d
6. I enjoy classroom discussions because they give insight about what other people think
7. contribute to the class discusion
8. i work our just chill with friends
9. my weekend was okay i went to the basketball game on friday and then we had a team sleep over after the game and then i had to work on saturday night sunday was a chill day i went to my brothers basketnall game that night monday i had another chill day.
10. no
2. short story,comic srtip, notes to friends
3.notes from friends,magzines, nonfiction,
4. no
5. d
6. I enjoy classroom discussions because they give insight about what other people think
7. contribute to the class discusion
8. i work our just chill with friends
9. my weekend was okay i went to the basketball game on friday and then we had a team sleep over after the game and then i had to work on saturday night sunday was a chill day i went to my brothers basketnall game that night monday i had another chill day.
10. no
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