Friday, February 17, 2012

fairy tale poem

why had this little mouse saved me knowing i could have easliy eaten him.
This lion doesnt need my saving he will be okay with out me

My love for him is so strong even tho he is so hideous.
She is gorgeuos but i have no feelings for her in that way.

He is so precious i must take him with me but i cant he is human and there are horrible people.
I hear this lovely singing in my ear am i dead.

The grasshopper took the ants food because they are tiny and helpless
The ants rebeled againt the grasshopper and didnt give him any food and they killed the grasshopper

I am sick and tired of always cleaning for my evi step mother i am running away and never coming back
I wish my fairy god mother would come help me i dont not wish to be this way anymore

i am walking in these dark woods i have no idea where to go.
She get lost in the woods forever

They all have a spot of tea and they talk about life in wonderland
The hatter goes crazy and kill alice

I have all this back pain and i have no clue why i need to get new mattress
Father  will you not get a me a new  bed just for my very own specail kind

i have run away from home because some crazy man was trying to kill me and now i can not find my way back. I was getting tired i wanted to sleep it feels as if i have been walking for hours. So it sit. While i was sitting i see a women in the distane i call out to her. She walks over to me. Do you know how to get out of here i ask. she says no. I am stuck her for ever i think to myself. I know you must be hungry my dear she says to me. She hands a big shinning red apple. I throw it dowwn i know what your trying to do you are my evil step mother and you are trying kill me. I get up and run deeper into the forest.

Monday, February 13, 2012

i believe essay reviews

I believe in soccer:  I thought that this essay was well written. It had a lot of detail it put me in the moment and i could really imgaine this person being scared and not knowing what to do because he was new. I really enjoyed reading this essay.

Thursday, February 9, 2012

He walked through the door wind blowing his hair back. The scent of axe cologne hit me like a baseball baller hitting a ball. “He is fine” my friend said. “He is so fine ” I said biting my lip as he walked pass us.
My friend and I are walking down the hall to our next period class. She points and says “Look she is  coming in our direction.”  And there she was walking down the hall. As she walked pass me I gave her the glare of death and nudge her with my elbow. She stumbled a little and kept walking down the hall.  

Monday, February 6, 2012

in class assingment

As i tossed the squishy chew toy to my cat so cat can go gete it for me. I looked over and a mouse was peeping out his little mouse hole. I saw him peep out one more time. Then he was gone when i looked again. i was looking all over the place for the mouse. Out of the corner of my eye i saw him scurrying along the wall. I wonder where was he scurrying to? I follewed the little mouse until i saw where he was headed. He was headed towards the kitchen. he probally just wanted some cheese.

So i hurryed to the kitchen and tried to prevent him from getting my pricely brie I imported from France. "You won't get that cheese!" I yelled out loud. The mouse, seemingly excited for the meal he thought he was about to get, exuberantly scurried twords the refridgerator. I needed something to try to hit him with, so I scanned around the room for a possilbe weapon. Just when I thought I would have to just use my shoe, I found the perfect item; a heavy eagle statue my grandfater gave me for my 19th birthday. I always felt it was ugly, so I didn't really mind getting mouse guts all over it. As the mouse stoped to figure out a way to get into the refridgerator, I had the perfect opportunity to put an end to his midnight snack run. As I raised the statue over my head, the mouse turned around and looked at me. His eyes were filled with something that can only be described as desperation, just like you would see in a person.

"This is ridiculous! Why do I care about the life of some dumb little mouse?" Yet the thought of its guts exploding all over the room left me heartbroken.  The eagle statue dropped down and hung limply by my side like withered lettuce three days past its prime.  I decided that instead of an explosion of mouse pieces around the room, a live capture would be the most humanitarian effort I could make.  Frantically, I searched around the room for a cup that I could quickly drop over the mouse's head in order to trap it.  But as my eyes roved around the room, I saw the flitting of tail scurrying by my side, and I knew in that istant that the mouse was gone. 

As i slowly dragged my feet out of the kitchen i couldn't decide if i was happy or sad about letting the mouse live.  I got into my bed and looked over at my toy cowboy and i noticed that he had a friend.  The mouse was laying right next to him.  I jumped up and ran to catch the mouse.  I didn't know what i was going to do once i caught him.  It had became a game for me.  He dove into the sand that i was planning to use for my science project, i tried to dig for him but he was as fast as lightning getting away. At this point i was just angry, scared, and didn't know what too do,

Thursday, February 2, 2012

actice sentencs

1.When I walked into that crowded entryway, I got some very weird looks and quite a few raised eyebrows

When i walked into the resturant it felt as if i was in a amusment park on a summer day with all the people in the doorway, As I was walking in i got all kinds of weird looks as if i had a huge instect on my face or some sort of diese.

2.One couple kept walking by our table just to get a look at my baby

While we were sitting at our table a couple keep trouting by to get a better look at my baby.

3.“Congratulations, you have a new baby boy!” my child-development teacher said as she handed over the 10-pound bundle.

"Congratulations, you are now mother of a new baby boy!" my teacher stated to me in the happeist tone i have ever heard in while. She handed the baby as she handed to i felt as if a huge weight was just dropped in my hands.